Sugarcane

<<set $redPill = "yes">>\nYou swallow the red pill. Feeling dizzy. You fell asleep. You wake in front of a gate. You decide to [[open|Cycle]] it. \n

<<if visited("south3") eq 1>>You walk through the darkness and noticed a source of light to your left.<<endif>>\nGo [[south|deadEnd]]\n<<if visited("south3") eq 1>>Go [[east|Pillar of Eleos]]<<else>>Go [[north|east5]]<<endif>>\nGo [[west|deadEnd]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>

You hit a dead end. You stretch out your arms on either side. Feeling nothing, indicating a path to your left.\nGo [[west|deadEnd]]\nGo [[east|east5]]\nGo [[south|deadEnd]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>\n

You decide to take the path to your right. However it led to a dead end.\n<<back>>

<html><IMG SRC="http://i39.tinypic.com/2m9vg2.jpg"></html>Continue to next [[page|VladP4]].\n<<back>>

<html><IMG SRC="http://i42.tinypic.com/r6zk49.png"></html>Continue to next [[page|VladP3]].\n<<back>>

<html><IMG SRC="http://i43.tinypic.com/2ztj0p4.png"></html>\nContinue to next [[page|VladP2]].

Hello <<print $playerName>>,\nWelcome to my first Twine game. I hope you enjoy this as much I enjoyed creating the game. Please click [[start|intro]] to begin. Enjoy.\nEnter code:(Enter starburst if you would like to see the process narrative)\n<<textinput $code >>\nAll images and videos belong to there respective owners.\n

<html><IMG SRC="http://i39.tinypic.com/2e2qb1v.jpg"></html>[[Continue|Logos]]\n<<back>>

<<silently>>\n<<set $pillarOfZeus="no">>\n<<set $pillarOfAthena="no">>\n<<set $pillarOfEleos="no">>\n<<set $redPill="no">>\n<<endsilently>>\nEnter your name:\n<<textinput $playerName>>\n[[Proceed|myintro]] \n\n

<<if visited("intro") eq 1>>You wake up in your room. Feeling sick you decide to take some medicine. There are two pills on your desk. <<endif>>Take the <<if visited("intro") eq 1>>[[redpill|redPill]] or the <<endif>>[[bluepill|bluePill]].\n\n<<if $code eq "starburst" and visited("intro") eq 1>>Process Narrative\nThis idea I took from the matrix universe. Where the redpill lets you gain awareness of the reality. Like a reflection which you gain better understanding of something. The blue pill is exactly the opposite it represent how you are blind to reality.This blue pill leds to writing. Which ultimately ends with a reflection. \n<<endif>>

<html><object width="480" height="385"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/lUtnas5ScSE?fs=1&hl=en_GB&rel=0"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/lUtnas5ScSE?fs=1&hl=en_GB&rel=0" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="480" height="385"></embed></object></html>\n[[Continue|Pathos]]\n<<if $code eq "starburst">><<endif>>

<<if $redPill eq "no">>Swallowing the blue pill. Your vision goes dark and you pass out on your bed....<<endif>> Drip...Drip. You felt a icy cold touch on your forehead. It felt familar. You lay there trying to remember. But the thoughts slowly fades away. Slowly opening your eyes to the darkness. You get up from the moist earth, "Where am I?". The sound echo in the darkness. You felt something in your pocket. Searching your pocket you found your phone. You try turning the phone on, however it was unresponsive. You tried again this time it turned on. You then proceed to walk aimlessly in the [[darkness|moveForward]]. \n\n<<if $code eq "starburst">>Process Narative-In the beginning I wanted to base this game on the element of horror. I did't know why but maybe it was because I played Amnesia the night before. In the end I scrap this idea because I couldn't think of any way to incorpate this in the game. But this did lead to another idea. Which was the analogy of darkness and writing. Usually when I'm writing on several occusions I would get lost, or go off topic, and sometimes get stuck. This is similar to being in the dark. You can't see anything. You are lost and you don't know where your going. I started the dream with "drip...drip" as an analogy of Joe tapping on your head. Trying to get you to type or brainstorm ideas.<<endif>>

In writing ethos is the ability to make the readers trust you. To make the readers believe in what you say. In others to be credibe. Which of those phases present Ethos?\n[[1.|wrong]] "In this difficult day, in this difficult time for the United States, it's perhaps well to ask what kind of a nation we are and what direction we want to move in."\n[[2.|Pillar of Zeus]] "I had a member of my family killed, but he was killed by a white man."\n[[3.|wrong]] "What we need in the United States is not division; what we need in the United States is not hatred; what we need in the United States is not violence and lawlessness, but is love, and wisdom, and compassion toward one another."\n<<if $code eq "starburst">>I chose RFK's speech for the ethos because I clearly remember the strong ethos appeal in his speech. I remembered the sentence "I had a member of my family killed, but he was killed by a white man." This sentence hold a great deal of ethos. This why I used RFk's speech for ethos in this project. <<endif>>

<<if visited("Pillar of Athena") eq 1>>You approach a pillar. Engraved on its wall was a drawing of a woman who held a book in her hand.\n"You are lost." a voice said.\n"Let me guild you."\n[[VladP1]]\n <<else>> <<set $pillarOfAthena = "yes">> "You have answer the question correctly.<<if $pillarOfZeus eq "no" or $pillarOfEleos eq "no">> Now go and find my other colleagues.<<else>> The gate has opened.<<endif>>" [[Exit|north4]]<<endif>>\n\n<<if $code eq "starburst" and visited("Pillar of Athena") eq 1>>In greek mythology Athena is the goddess of wisdom, mathematics, strategy, and other things. Since logos is logic I decide to name the Pillar Athena, since she is the goddess of wisdom, mathematics, and strategy.<<endif>>

Your path is blocked you cannot proceed forward.\n<<back>>

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<<if Math.random()*11 lte 8 or visited("Map") eq 1>><html><IMG SRC="http://i42.tinypic.com/14me78g.jpg"></html><<else>>Your phone isn't turning on. You cannot see in the dark.<<endif>>\n\n<<if visited("Map") eq 1>>[[Exit map|mazeStart]]<<set $pillarOfZeus="no">>\n<<set $pillarOfAthena="no">>\n<<set $pillarOfEleos="no">><<else>><<back>><<endif>>\n\n<<if $code eq "starburst" and visited("Map") eq 1>>\nProcess Narrative-\nI really wasn't planing on creating a game. However after I saw the comments on the second draft I became motivated to create one. This was the result. I decide to do a maze. The character in the game sees the map with the light from the phone.To make this more like a game I decide to limit the amount of time the player can pull up the map. But this didn't work out because the variable I used to count the number of times the player visited the page didn't increase each time the player visited the page. So to work around this I decided to make the map display random. There is an 80% chance of the map appearing each time the player clicks on it. <<endif>>

macros['back'] =\n{\n handler: function (place, name, params)\n {\n var hash = '';\n\n if (params[0]) {\n for (var i = 0, event; event = state.history[i++];) {\n if (event.passage.title == params[0]) {\n hash = event.hash;\n break;\n }\n }\n } else if (state.history[1] && state.history[1].hash) {\n hash = state.history[1].hash;\n } else {\n throwError(place, "can't go back from the first passage read");\n return;\n }\n\n if (!hash) {\n throwError(place, "can't find passage '" + params[0] + "' in history");\n return;\n };\n\n el = document.createElement('a');\n el.className = 'back';\n el.href = hash;\n el.innerHTML = '<b>«</b> Back';\n place.appendChild(el);\n }\n};

You continue walking through the dark while touching the walls. You felt nothing on your right hand. Indicating a path.\nGo [[north|north6]]\nGo [[east|east6]]\nGo [[west|deadEnd]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>\n

<<if visited("north4") eq 1>>You walk through the darkness and noticed a source of light to your right.<<endif>>\nGo [[north|deadEnd]]\n<<if visited("north4") eq 1>>Go [[east|Pillar of Athena]]<<else>>Go [[south|east4]]<<endif>>\nGo [[west|deadEnd]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>

You reached a dead end.\n<<back>>

You continue walking through the dark while touching the walls. You felt nothing on your right hand. Indicating a path.\nGo [[north|north2]]\nGo [[east|east2]]\nGo [[west|deadEnd]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>\n\n

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<<if visited("north3") eq 1>>You walk through the darkness and noticed a source of light to your left.<<endif>>\nGo [[north|deadEnd]]\nGo [[east|deadEnd]]\n<<if visited("north3") eq 1>>Go [[west|Pillar of Zeus]]<<else>>Go [[south|east3]]<<endif>>\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>

You march forth aimlessly in the dark. You eventually hit a dead end.\n<<back>>

You see light ahead. As you approach you see a gaint gate. You decide to open the gate.<<if $pillarOfZeus eq "yes" and $pillarOfAthena eq "yes" and $pillarOfEleos eq "yes">>With ease you manage to open the gate. [[continue|Cycle]]<<else>>You tried to open the gate. But no matter how much you push. The gate remain in your path.<<endif>>\n<<back>>

<html><IMG SRC="http://i43.tinypic.com/6nxwep.jpg"></html>\n[[Continue|Ethos]]\n<<back>>

<html><IMG SRC="http://i41.tinypic.com/e9yi5t.jpg"></html>\nContinue to next [[page|RFK P3]] \n<<back>>

<html><IMG SRC="http://i42.tinypic.com/2m5mrf5.jpg"></html>\nContinue to next [[page|RFK P2]] \n<<back>>

The gate lead to a room. In the room was a desk with a candle as a source of light that engulf the room. On the desk there was a piece of paper. You decide to read it.\n "In the begin I was lost. I wondered were I was. In this darkness I couldn't see my hands or feet. However, I continue to move forward.I hit several walls, but I never gave up. Through my journey I encountered strange pillars. Approaching these pillars I heared voices. I thought I was crazy, hearing voices in my head. These voice would ask me questions pertaining to ethos, pathos, and logos. At first I ignored these voice. Later I found out these question are essential to finding my way out of this darkness. On several occasions I went to there pillars and tried answering the question. I couldn't understand ethos, pathos, or logos. I was stuck. Not giving up I wandered in the dark repeatly I ask myself "What is ethos, pathos, and logos?". After some time I arrive at the conclusion that ethos, pathos, and logos are methods use to appeal to people. I realize the potential meaning of this and decided to continue to develop a deeper understanding of pathos, ethos, and logos. Using it in everyday life to become a better writer and to achieve my dreams."\n<<if $pillarOfZeus eq "no" and $pillarOfAthena eq "no" and $pillarOfEleos eq "no">>Become [[lost|bluePill]].<<endif>>\n\n<<if $code eq "starburst">>This part is the reflection of the class. I had to use a letter because I felt like I could use it to directly convey my thoughts. I tried to match it with the game yet symbolize my experience in the class at the same time. <<endif>>

Logos is an appeal to logic. Which can be in form of statistics or a simple use of reasoning. Which of one these phrase presents logos?\n[[1.|Pillar of Athena]] "The potential strike by the United States against Syria, despite strong opposition from many countries and major political and religious leaders, including the pope, will result in more innocent victims and escalation, potentially spreading the conflict far beyond Syria’s borders. A strike would increase violence and unleash a new wave of terrorism."\n[[2.|wrong]] "We stood against each other during the cold war. But we were also allies once, and defeated the Nazis together."\n[[3.|wrong]] "But when we ask for the Lord’s blessings, we must not forget that God created us equal."\n<<if $code eq "starburst">>I decided to use Vlad's letter to the United states as the representation for logos because I felt like the piece excute logos really well. Vlad's letter argues it point with logic and support. Like a hypthesis to there were many ifs and then in his letter.<<endif>>

You continue through the darkness, however you hit a deadend.\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>

You continue walking through the dark while touching the walls. You felt nothing on your right hand. Indicating a path.\nGo [[north|deadEnd]]\nGo [[east|east3]]\nGo [[south|south1]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>\n

<<if visited("east3") eq 1>>You continue walking through the dark while touching the walls. You felt nothing on your left hand. Indicating a path.<<else>>You continue walking through the dark while touching the walls. You felt nothing on your left and right hand. Indicating a path.<<endif>>\n<<if visited("east3") eq 1>>Go [[north|north3]]<<else>>Go [[west|east2]]<<endif>>\nGo [[east|east4]]\nGo [[south|deadEnd]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>\n

You hit a dead end.\nGo [[north|north4]]\nGo [[east|deadEnd]]\nGo [[south|south2]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>\n

You hit a dead end. You stretch out your arms on either side. Feeling nothing, indicating a path to your rigth and left.\nGo [[north|north5]]\nGo [[east|deadEnd]]\nGo [[south|south3]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n<<back>>\n

Go [[north|north7]]\nGo [[east|deadEnd]]\nGo [[south|gate]]\nLook at [[map|Map]] \n<<back>>

"Wrong" the god said. "try agian."\n<<back>>

Finding a rhetorical meaning in the dark through a maze

<<if visited("Pillar of Eleos") eq 1>>You approach the pillar. On the pillar a television was embeded in center. Press [[play|video]].\n<<else>><<set $pillarOfEleos = "yes">>"You have answer the question correctly.<<if $pillarOfZeus eq "no" or $pillarOfAthena eq "no">> Now go and find my other colleagues.<<else>> The gate has opened.<<endif>>" [[Exit|south3]]<<endif>> \n\n<<if $code eq "starburst">>To find a name for this pillar I actually had to google search "greek god of pity". Lucky for the greeks had gods for everything. I used the god of pity because I relate pity to pathos This pillar is different from the rest because of several reasons. One is that I'm not visually familar with this god. Another reason I decide to put a television is because it fits the rhetorical piece I had in mind for pathos. Which is a video so I require a televison to be in the pillar. Which kinda of throws off the environment and mood of the game. <<endif>>

Go [[north|north1]]\nGo [[east|east1]] \nGo [[south|deadEnd]]\nLook at [[map|Map]]\n\n<<if $code eq "starburst" and visited("mazeStart") eq 1>>\nProcess Narrative-\nOriginally I wanted a much more convenient user interface. I wanted to have "Go north" centered on first line. On second line "Go west" and "Go east" with a blank space in between. Finally on the third "Go south" would be center. However I couldn't accomplish because I didn't know how to add several space nor how to center specific text. Another thing I wanted to add in the user interface were a life bar and phone usage. But due the fact I couldn't get count to work proper I dismissed the idea and worked with what I had. My ideal interface would of looked like this: <html><IMG SRC="http://i43.tinypic.com/2hhm9vs.png"></html>\nIt was a really shame that I couldn't use this interface because I already premade lower life bars and phone usage.\nWhich wasted alot of my time. \n<html><IMG SRC="http://i42.tinypic.com/21jwqx3.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i39.tinypic.com/15mzmtj.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i42.tinypic.com/oancle.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i42.tinypic.com/qrxg7k.jpg></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i41.tinypic.com/11rrbqe.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i42.tinypic.com/2d3rr7.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i42.tinypic.com/168ad1i.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i39.tinypic.com/2u4782e.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i44.tinypic.com/a4tp3r.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i44.tinypic.com/29urbz8.jpg"></html>\n<html><IMG SRC="http://i44.tinypic.com/28cda95.jpg"></html>\nHowever, looking at the life bar I felt that it would of been a better idea to use books instead of a life bar. Because my initial idea on how damage was taken was basically if the player purposely hit the wall. Using books would make more sense because the character would most likely be hiting his head against the wall. Which may after some time led to brain damge or drop in IQ. If books would be a representive of knowlege then the book count dropping would symbolize brain damage or decrease in IQ.\n\n<<endif>>

Pathos is an emotional appeal. Through emotions the writer or in this case the director is able to persuade the audience with there claims. Which of these pictures uses pathos?\n[[1.|Pillar of Eleos]]<html><IMG SRC="http://i43.tinypic.com/316xld3.jpg"></html>\n[[2.|wrong]]<html><IMG SRC="http://i39.tinypic.com/2a5eyac.jpg"></html>\n[[3.|wrong]]<html><IMG SRC="http://i39.tinypic.com/2rde1bk.jpg"></html>\n

<<if visited("Pillar of Zeus") eq 1>>You approach a pillar. Engraved on its wall was a drawing of a bearded old man. Siting on a throne. \n"You are lost." a voice boomed with a sense of authority.\n"I shall guild you."\nYou see a couple of paper fall down from the darkness above. You pick up the [[papers|RFK P1]]\n<<else>><<set $pillarOfZeus = "yes">>\n"Congratulations you have answer the question correct.<<if $pillarOfAthena eq "no" or $pillarOfEleos eq "no">> Now go and find my other colleagues.<<else>> The gate has opened.<<endif>>" [[Exit|north3]]<<endif>>\n\n<<if $code eq "starburst" and visited("Pillar of Zeus") eq 1>>Pillar of Zeus is a representation of ethos. There are two reason why I named this pillar after Zeus. The first is that its Greek, similar to how ethos is a Greek word. The second reason I used Zeus is because Zeus is the ruler of Gods in greek mythology. So he holds the highest power and authority over the rest of the gods. Similar to how ethos means authority.<<endif>>

Wilson Guo

Wandering in the darkness you tripped over a rock and your phone fell out of your pocket. The phone hit the ground and turned on. The light from the phone exposed a piece of paper that was on the ground. You pick up the [[paper|Map]].