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This is a orginal reimagining of a certain storyline from the new Stars film The Last Jedi. The Storyline that I have altered was concerning Finn, Poe, and Rose. After the films release this part specifically got a lot of backlash. Now if you haven’t seen the Last Jedi, please go see it so you can make up your own opinion and understand this.If you haven’t seen the movie this really won’t make any sense to you. If you have and enjoyed this part, I have no problem with that. This is simply how I would have written the film if I were in charge.
First things first we are going to change a few things with the setting up of this storyline. We are going to make Rose’s character the master hacker who says she can de-activate the hyperspace tracker. Which is what Finn and her go down to the casino planet to find. So basically there is no need to go to the Casino planet. Also no need for the master Hacker they find. Instead we have Finn, Poe and Rose all sneaking on to the First order ship together. Lastely Admiral Ackbar did not die. Besides those things everything else is still the same in the film.
From here we start our game. Through this twine you can follow certain characters through this mission to turn off the Light speed tracker and make decisions that you think would be best for the story. I will also be explaining why certain parts of this make sense for the overall story of the film and what cinematic benefits come from them. If the wrong descion is made and the mission fails, you will fail.
[[The First Order ship]]
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Finn, Rose and Poe all make it on to the The First Oder ship. Wanting to blend in they steel uniforms from an officer and 2 troopers. They then head to find the hyperspace tracker. On their way Poe(dressed as the officer) is stopped and told by another officer that all officers are suppose to report to a war meeting immediately. Poe protests and says he is handling business with his two troopers. The officer says the meeting is crucial, that his orders are to make sure every officer is there. He then orders Finn and Rose to head to the Mess hall becasue it is their Units eating hour. Realizing that he has no choice and that he could gather valuable intel from this, Poe agrees to go. Before he leaves he whispers to Finn to go wait for him in the Mess hall, if he isn’t back there soon to continue the mission without him and to get back to the ship even if they can’t find him.
[[Follow Finn and Rose]] or [[Follow Poe]]<<audio happysong stop>>
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Finn and Rose arrive in the Mess Hall. A crazy scene for the audience because we see our characters walk into literally the belly of the beast. The mess hall is filled with Storm Troopers. Who all at any moment could recognize Finn and the whole mission could be screwed. Rose wants to just leave immediately and go along with the Mission. Before they can leave though, they are pushed into line and end up getting served. Not wanting to cause a scene they don’t leave and decide to wait for Poe for a little longer. In line the group of troopers who they ended up in the middle of line with, start to have dialogue with Finn. This is the beginning of what this scene will be for, to humanizing the Troopers. Giving Star Wars fans something they have never seen. Turning the Troopers from mindless soldiers to real people. After they get their food, one of the troopers tells them to sit with them.
[[Join them at the table]] or [[have them sit by themselves]]<<audio happysong stop>>
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Poe heads with the other officer to the meeting. He arrives in the meeting and sits down in the back corner.
[[poe stands up and leaves before the meeting starts]] or [[Poe stays for the meeting]]This allows Finn and Rose to blend in. Good they did too, because Captain Phasma walks in and would have spotted them if they were alone at a table. In this scene we get more dialogue with the troopers learning more and more about them. This turns them into characters instead of just storm troopers. We see Phasma sit down and have her food by herself. During this the Storm troopers start to talk about how terrible she is and how much they all hate her. They also tell the different stories they have heard about her. Giving the audience some mysterious backstories for the character of Phasma. During all of this the audience will also get a crazy reveal of Phasma’s face as she takes off her mask to eat.
[[End Mess hall scene]]<<audio happysong play>>
This causes Finn and Rose to stick out, Captain Phasma comes in. She sees Finn,captures him and Rose then kills them both. Poe can’t break the code, the Resistance ship is destroyed. The First Order rules for a 1000 years.
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Finn and Rose leave the Mess hall after telling the other troopers they had to go. The two of them stand outside of the Mess hall worried about Poe.
[[have them go look for Poe]] or [[have them continue the mission and leave Poe]]<<audio happysong play>>
Doing this doesn’t make sense for our characters to do they have limited time and need to hurry. They have already taken to long in the mess hall. This was a problem with the original movie. The characters spend time doing things outside of their mission. They should have been focused on the mission because time was running out. Doing this causes them to run out of time looking for Poe. They get caught, the Resistance ship is destroyed and The First Oder rules for a 1000 years.
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There was no time to look for Poe our characters were already taking to much time in the Mess Hall. They had to get to the Tracker as soon as possible, otherwise they could fail the mission. This allows for the plot to also progress, if they went looking for the Poe the plot would have not really moved at all in the story for a long time. A problem the original film had.
Finn and Rose get to the tracker. Rose unlocks the door and begins to try and disable the tracker. Rose is having trouble with the tracker and then the alarm begins to sound. Captain Phasma comes on the intercom and says that there are intruders on the ship.
[[abandon the mission and escaper]] or [[keep trying to disable the tracker]]<<audio happysong play>>
Mission fails because Finn and Rose were scared to die for the casue. They die anyway the Resistance ship is destroyed and The First Oder rules for a thousand years.
<img src="https://daks2k3a4ib2z.cloudfront.net/575a31d2ce5d01dc7a20de4a/57690c200f88361e2da02bff_no%20gif.gif" />Finn is guarding the door when 2 troopers walk in, its 2 of the troopers they ate lunch with. They discovered that because the two troopers recognized Rose, who has her helmet off to try and crack the code. The troopers at first don’t think anything of Rose and Finn being in the room. Then they notice what Rose is doing, see she is hacking the system. Finn trys to plead with them to just walk away. The rest of the troop they ate with comes in, a shoot out happens. Finn shots the first two who were in the room. A sad moment in the Film and the franchise because for the first time the Storm troopers that were killed weren’t just random, they were characters that the audience knew.
Finn and Rose are pinned down next to the hyperspace tracker. Finn is hit, the troop fires at Rose but before they can hit her. Poe comes in from behind and takes the troop out.
[[Meet up]] or if you haven't yet go to [[Follow Poe]] <<audio DD play>>
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Finn is hurt but he was only hit in the arm. Poe ask them if they have hacked the hyperspace tracker yet. They say no and Rose says she doesn’t think she can. A moment for Rose’s character where we see her fail and will be built on later. Poe says he saw on the first order Maps that they aren’t far from the Salt planet where the resistance base is. The only problem is that the First order could destroy their ship right as it got the planet because it would be out of fuel. Then here is where Rose’s characters redeems herself. She reveals that she can reset the gun system through this computer, it would only give them a short time to take escape pods to go down to the planet. Whoever makes it down can make a small defense on the base. All they have to do is get the message to the resistance ship. They execute the Plan. The next part is pretty similar to the original movie with minor changes. The resistance begins to slowly go down to the planet to mount their defense. Rose resets the gun systems so the resistance can get down to the planet. The time doesn’t allow them to get all the ships down there and out of range of the cannons. So Admiral Ackbar who is still on the ship, takes the contols and flies through the First Order fleet in a jump to hyperspace. Just like Admrial Holder does in the orginal film, a great scene but since in this version its Admiral Akbahr doing it, it has way more wait.
[[Final]]
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Poe gets caught by another general asking where he is going. This causes people to ask him questions he gets caught. Kylo Ren forces the information out of him and figures out the plan. The resistance ship is destroyed and The First Order rules for a 1000 years.
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Poe stays for the meeting. In the meeting he learns about a bunch of First Order plans for the future and what they plan to do in the current situation.This part could be a great way to set up a final conflict for the final film in the trilogy, something this film didn’t do well. Also in the meeting as the officers are going over their project path. Poe notices a planet on their project path that has an old resistance base on it, the Salt planet from the original Last Jedi. At the end of the meeting all the plans he sees are given on a drive to an officer.
[[Poe Follows the officer]] or [[Poe heads to the Mess hall]]<<audio happysong stop>>
Poe follows the officer. When he get around a corner Poe grabs him. Poe knocks him out and takes the drive. He hides the Officer in a closet. When he closes the closet door, Poe releazes their is a droid watching him.
[[Poe shots the droid]] or [[Poe doesn't shoot the droid]]<<audio happysong play>>
Poe travels down to the Mess Hall when he gets there Finn and Rose are no where to be found. Poe heads to the elevator to see if they already headed to to the Hyperspace tracker. The elevator opens Kylo Ren is inside, he immediately recognizes Poe from the last film and captures him. Then forces out of him why he is here. The mission fails, the resistance ship is destroyed and the First Order rules for a thousand years.
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Poe shoots the droid in the head. Then heads to the hyperspace tracker to meet Finn and Rose. Right as he leaves though, The droid begins to reboot and after a little bit of time it wakes back up. The Droid then proceeds to sound the alarm.
Poe hears the alarm sound. By the time it went off he was luckily far enough from the droid that he could get to the hyperspace tracker pretty quickly. Before he turn the hallway to the hyperspace tracker, he hears shots.
[[Poe checks them out]] or [[Poe waits for them to stop]]<<audio happysong play>>
The Droid immediately sounds the alarm and you are caught. Finn and Rose are also caught before they can crack the code. The resistance ship is destroyed and The First Oder rules for a 1000 years.
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Poe sees that Finn and Rose are introuble. Poe has his big Hero moment when we get to really see who his charecter is. He flanks the Storm troopers, then takes them all down, not miising a shot and saves both of them.
[[Meet up]]
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Poe waits, as a result Finn and Rose are killed. The resitance ship is destoryed and The First Order rules for a 1000 years.
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The rest of the Film proceeds as it did in the orginal. Hopefully the resitance will proveal in the future and the First Order won't rule for a 1000 years. I hope you enjpyed the Altered story.
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[[The Start]]